Shang Yue
Historian
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Post by Shang Yue on Jul 5, 2012 18:17:24 GMT -5
Character Biography:Account: Shang Yue Name: Chikauji Kosokabe Age: 17 Affiliation: Chosokabe Physical Imagery:History:Chikauji Kosokabe is the eldest son of Chikayasu Kosokabe and brother to Sadachika Kosokabe. He died of illness in 1592, while living in Tosa. He didn't have any children, and not much was known about him. After his father Chikayasu left to join his brother Motochika, Chikauji was tempted to stay behind and keep living his life, but ended up following his father. He get lost on his way to Tosa and lost sight of his father; when he finally arrived, Chikayasu had already gone, as the city guards informed him. He decided to stay and wait for his father and uncle, and give the news that he wanted to move up in the world. Weaponry:Chikauji isn't very fond of battles, but he carries a small sword for personal safety. He also plays te hocchiku (bamboo flute), and is always seen with one in hand or in his waist Critical Strike:Chikauji takes a step back and plays a quick paced melody in his flute, leaving enemies nearby paralyzed (he's a great musician!) for some time. Can't use when surrounded. Also, for the duration of the effect, Chikauji cannot perform any actions, meaning he cannot attack a paralyzed enemy to get a free kill (he's busy playing!). Also, if morale is too high, it will miss generals. Limited to one use per battle. Note: sorry for lack of historical details, but I couldn't find anything about him, only his year of death. Image isn't very accurate according to the description he was given in The Chosokabe Family RP topic, but just imagine that face without the heavy armor. I hope it's okay =/
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Post by Admin on Jul 5, 2012 18:47:48 GMT -5
If I am correct this would be your second character, not a problem. With that being said I would have to ask you to give us some more details on his Critical Strike. As of now it just states that he can paralyze anyone near him, though not if he is surrounded. This does not really tell us to what extent it does to other Characters/Generals/Players. Need to know exactly what it will due to them and needs to be stated in the app. Also with some weaknesses. Currently you can stun the best and probably kill them, that would be a no no Daniel.
As for the history, I understand your situation and it is acceptable. Maybe you can add in the history about him joining the Chosokabe or what have you. I'm not sure what you expect out of this character, if you're going to stay as a ronin or what. Either way, try to make it a full paragraph for us.
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Post by Admin on Jul 5, 2012 19:50:25 GMT -5
Now that he can not get a free shot at a general, I see no issue.
-Accepted
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