Sannu - The Iced Maiden

[Simon]

Character Biography:
Account: simon
Name: Sannu (Nickname: Striker)
Age: 24
Affiliation: Herself (Ronin)

Physical Imagery:
They say that appearances can often be misgiving, or even names, but despite the soft creamy-golden skin upon Sannu's face and her golden twinkling eyes, she is no angel, and not one to let her guard down so easily. One would also notice that her left eye tends to be darker than the other, mostly hidden by her hair, and yet she sees perfectly. She is gifted with beautiful white-blonde hair that reaches down to her shoulders, while the rest of her body is covered in silver armor girded with gold trimmings.



History:
Sannu was the daughter of a blacksmith, and working in a blacksmith, she learnt the tricks of the trade. While her father made the equipment, she went off to get the materials. Sounds like a piece of cake, except when the one giving the materials asks for a greater price, which of course was herself. His request was the last one he would ever make, as in a twinkling of an eye, he could no longer request anything else.

Due to the many problems with the Shogunate, they could not rely on the Shogunate to deal with these, as many took matters into their own hands, and the Governor was just some hungry man looking for women and bags of gold, so when she returned home one day and saw her father killed, she swore revenge, but for now, she now had her fathers' business to continue.

Unlike her father, she was not talented in doing what she was told, more for what she felt doing. So when a customer entered and asks for something specific, she'd glance them over, tell them to come back the day after, then give them something that they didn't ask for. She was blunt, and made sure the way she felt was heard, but at the same time, she kept her anger concealed until she was ready to lash out.

Seeing that her fathers' demise hadn't affected her, they then ridded her of all she had left of her father, which was the Blacksmith, leaving her with little, but what they had not took away were her weapons, or the armor that her father made.

Weaponry:
Sannu carries a Dual Blade Sword which consists of two swords, with each sword having 2 blades, and the hilts being able to fit together to form one large weapon. Separately, they can be used as twin swords, or as a dagger due to how sharp they are and how they can dig into the skin. Sannu stands no messing when she means business.

Some suggest that Sannu has a heart of ice, either due to her bluntless, or the fact that her weapons have an ice element, to make sure part of her frozen nature is unleashed on those she faces, before striking them hard. (refer to 0:06 - 0:14 for visual effects, link at end of bio)

Critical Strike:
(refer to 0:16 - 00:26 for visual effects, link at end of bio)

With her ice element and her desire to fight, she demonstrates how strong she is in her critical strike, a.k.a as her "Glacier Strike", hence her nickname as "Striker" since she strikes hard on her enemies and as a striking personality, and if she has any goals, she would strike high for them.

Sannu's "Glacier Strike" involves her lifting her right hand high before striking down diagonally to her left side, before lifting her left hand and striking horizontally to her right to cut away the damage that her left hand had done. Due to how much is involved, it can only be used twice in a single battle, but requires a period of at least 3/4 turns to be able to commit to another action.

Note: Critical Strike is to be used to simply keep enemy troops away from Sannu. Ice effects only really work on soldiers, since players (which tend to have stronger armor, stronger weapons, etc), so from the first strike with the ice (if any players in vicinity where its used), the use of age would simply halt advance towards Sannu, whereas the second part would push them back a little, but due to how strong they are compared to players, they'd still be standing.

Link: Here

---> Any areas of improvement or anything need to be changed, then let me know

[Fūma Kotarō [Andae]]

Okay, I've read through this App twice, just in case I missed anything, and I can safely say that there is NOTHING out of order, her Crit Strike seems fair enough, and you've clearly stated that it's only intended to deal serious damage to troops.

I take it as this is another Character for yourself, in which case

-Approved.

If she's intended for an NPC force, then she's good to go.