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Post by beatrix on Jul 21, 2012 12:20:20 GMT -5
Character Biography:Account: beatrix Name: Wakahisa Tsukiko 若久月子 Age: 24 Affiliation: None Physical Imagery:Her eyes are as black as coal, while her hairis as pale as the moon, from which she gets her name. Instead of having it up in the traditional style of samurai or of women, she allows it to flow free of any bindings. Her skin is pale as well. She usually wears a blue kimono with white cherry blossoms weaved into them with a white obi that is not traditionally tied, for she uses it to hold her weapons. She is not very tall, about 5', and weighs around 100 lbs. History:She was born in a small village to parents that did not have enough resources to raise her, so they sold her to a geisha house in Kyoto. Her original name is not known, but when she lost her misuage, she was named Tsukiko, not after her Sister, but rather after her looks. Later, she was adopted by the Mother of the geiko, giving her her full name of Wakahisa Tsukiko. People came to see her for her unusual looks and were focused on her dance and her music. One patron was enamored by her and became her danna at the age of 17. He taught her how to defend herself, which came to her more naturally than serving tea and conversation. At 19, her geiko was burned down in something that she knew not what happened, but then was taken in by her danna. She ended up killing his wife for disrespecting her and the obvious signs of jealousy, and moved out on her own, taking nothing but the silk kimono on her back, a katana for protection, and a fan for entertaining for whenever she needed the money. Weaponry:A simple katana in a simple, black sheath and a wooden fan. Critical Strike:During a battle, she can entice a few soldiers with a showing of her leg, dazing them for a short while before hacking them down with her katana. Only works on soldiers immediately around her. If a PC is in the area, then it will just do damage to them. It can be used up to 5 times per battle, starting out as a small number and growing by multiples of 2 as word will spread through the ranks of this woman.
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Post by Fūma Kotarō [Andae] on Jul 21, 2012 12:25:31 GMT -5
I like the Critical strike, very creative, I take it from the way that you've described said attack, it's ineffective to officers? (PC Charaters)
Apart from that little curiosity, she's good, certainly interesting, you have my Vote.
[Insert seal of Approval here]
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Post by beatrix on Jul 21, 2012 12:27:35 GMT -5
XD I didn't think about PC's. I was thinking for PC's it could do damage, but not kill them.
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Post by Fūma Kotarō [Andae] on Jul 21, 2012 13:04:13 GMT -5
I'm a little confused of what you mean by
Does this mean that the number of uses increases, or the number of foes felled?
Also, one last thing, a cooldown time? And the duration, E.G.
Fuma Kotaro's Critical Strike can be used 3 times per battle, and the attack will last for 2 Posts with a 10 Post cool down.
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Post by beatrix on Jul 21, 2012 14:29:32 GMT -5
It takes 2 turns to complete: One to get the attention of the opposition's soldiers and another one to hack them down. I will make The cool down be 8 posts after the second post is completed. Also, the number increases would be like this: Say if she used it the first time, and it killed 10 people. The second time, it would kill 20 people, then 40, then 80, and finally 160, felling only a total of 310 ~.~ But that's just an example XD.
I'll edit it in into my CS.
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Post by Admin on Jul 21, 2012 14:49:51 GMT -5
I am kinda against an attack that continually becomes more and more powerful, especially that she is one person and killing 20 or so units with a katana...but with the numbers of units everyone will have it is alright. Especially since it won't do much to players.
-Approved
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Post by Fūma Kotarō [Andae] on Jul 21, 2012 19:21:09 GMT -5
I'm with the boss on that one, it all seems fair ^^
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